100 Word Challenge Week 12


It’s the afternoon and I was hungry. I walked into the kitchen to make a sandwich. After I went down stairs to play a game but the battery in the controller was dead so then I went back upstairs to get a white piece of bread to eat. The next hour I was so energetic my parents told me to slow down but I didn’t. A week after that we all hurried out the door because we would be late for a flight but we made it we were going to pairs for two weeks. First week there we played in the pool.

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  1. Try not to switch from past tense to present tense in the middle of a sentence.
    Try not to repeat words like "I".
    I like how you added a tiny problem.

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