100 word challenge week 7

I knew he was angry when he banged on every school door. That was when the school was on lock down. He pulled on every single door to see if they were open. Then he went to the office door and pulled on the handle that was when he got into the school. As the door slammed, I knew he was angry when he went to the school doors he tried to open the inside doors but he couldn't get in then I was scared about him trying to barge into the classroom. He was so angry that he couldn't get in then...

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  1. Hello Mrporkchop,
    This is an interesting interpretation of the prompt. You have used some descriptive vocabulary e.g. 'barge'. Remember not to repeat words in a short piece of writing like this e.g. 'school', 'door', and 'angry'. Well done on completing Week #7 of the 100 Word Challenge.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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